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Tuesday, February 15, 2005

If you love someone...

This is one of the most beautiful stories that I've ever read and one that I felt like sharing with everyone. Here goes...


Once upon a time, there was a bird. He was adorned with two perfect wings and with glossy, colourful, marvellous feathers. In short, hewas a creature made to fly about freely in the sky, bringing joy to everyone who saw him.

One day, a woman saw this bird and fell in love with him. She watched his flight, her mouth wide in amazement, her heart pounding, her eyes shining with excitement. She invited the bird to fly with her, and the two travelled across the sky in perfect harmony. She admired and venerated and celebrated that bird.

But then she thought: He might want to visit far-off mountains! And she was afraid, afraid that she would never feel the same way about any other bird. And she felt envy, envy for the bird;s ability to fly.

And she felt alone. And she thought:" I'm going to set a trap. The next time the bird appears, he will never leave again."

The bird, who was also in love, returned the following day, fell into the trap and was put in a cage.

She looked at the bird everyday. There he was, the object of her passion, and she showed him to her friends, who said: "Now you have everything you could possibly want." However, a strange transformation began to take place: now that she had the bird and no longer needed to woo him, she began to lose interest. The bird, unable to fly and express the true meaning of his life, began to waste away and his feathers began to lose their gloss; he grew ugly; and the woman no
longer paid him any attention, except by feeding him and cleaning out
his cage.

One day, the bird died. The woman felt terribly sad and spent all her time thinking about him. But she did not remember the cage, she thought only of the day when she had seen him for the first time, flying contentedly amongst the clouds.

If she had looked more deeply into herself, she would have realized that what had thrilled her about the bird was his freedom, the energy of his wings in motion, not his physical body.

Without the bird, her life too lost all-meaning, and Death came knocking at her door. 'Why have you come?' she asked Death. 'So that you can fly once more with him across the sky,' Death replied. 'If you had allowed him to come and go, you would have loved and admired him even more; alas, you now need me in order to find him again.'


Paul Coelho
Eleven Minutes


22 comments :

  1. Woah. Looks like a moral science story that I read somewhere.

    It does have a moral, though

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  2. cute story :)

    i read the alchemist by the same author, kind of liked it

    i've got an electronic version of silmarallion and to kill a mockingbird.

    i like sci fi stories, do you have any?

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  3. I am that bird and I want to fly home:(

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  4. Kyunki bird bhi kabhi udthi thi :)

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  5. Yeah that's a nice book. I really loved some of the diary entries that she writes. Although I've forgotten the exact words...

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  6. cute lil piece that..:)
    and i see that u have reorganized ur template...looking good...:)

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  9. Touchy one. Such things really happens in every relation in our life and (I believe) the cage is called "expectation".

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  10. Ive read this book :) nice one.
    The diary entries are really touching.

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  11. Hey thanks for dropping by my blog !!!

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  12. nice story.... true indeed.. we should never be possessive abt anything..
    in love and friendship, we should never have any expectations, should accept as it comes....
    btb, nice blog u have....
    i've come here a coupld of times earlier.. but first time commenting.. will visit regularly..
    have a nice day.. :)

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  13. Nice one.
    Apart from the death & remorse bit it sounds like way too many marriages, except the genders are usually reversed.
    Glad the moral is out there.

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  14. Nice story.

    11 Minues, that book is in my 'to be read' list...

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  15. Wonderful story!!

    But have you read The Nightingale and the Rose - Its a short story of Sacrifice for love. Will post it on my blog later this month.

    thanks for the blogroll.
    Bye and take care

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  16. wonderful story. very thought provoking. btw thanks for dropping by my journal

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  17. Coelho writes some of the most beautiful stories you ever come across..The thing I like about him is that he can pass the most philosophical lessons - without sounding the least bit philosophical. I simply love his work. I've read the alchemist and the devil and miss prym. 11 Minutes is next in the line.
    Vardan

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  18. I once was that bird... and then I realized that there was no cage and so I spread my wings and surprised myself by flying...

    The cage was my imagination.

    I liked the story... sometimes we create cages instead of love...

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  19. Updated my blogroll - added you ... hope its ok ..

    Vardan

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  20. Thanks everyone, for posting a comment. This story is very close to my heart, as it taught me the one thing that I always found difficult to do, i.e. letting go..
    As they say,
    If you love someone, set him free.
    If he comes back he was yours,
    If he doesn't, he never was meant to be...

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  21. I changed my thoughts about the story once i read it. on the surface its a message about not being possessive and caging your love but at a deeper sense the bird is love itself. We have set notions of love and are afraid that it will go away never to return. What we fail to realise is that it is not the expectation but the spontainity that makes it what it is. One of my favourites too

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